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Artist's Comments
I got some new brushes from brusheezyz and I wanted to have a reason to try them out, so I drew a picture of Revi LoL
The pose was a pain. If you still see some mistakes, you can tell me what I could change/improve , because I'm blind, sometimes XP I dunno, I'm sick of doing mistakes again and again x.x Hm, maybe I'll use is as a new DA I.D. , I'm not sure yet. Hope you like it ^-^ Revi ( c ) me glow brushes are from brusheezyz edit.: I've found out that the brushes artist is on DA, too X3 Take a look at ~rubina119 's art ^-^ Don't steak my character Commentssooo cool! I love your drawing style!
-- avatar- *Kiss-the-Iconist Gifts made for me-[link] Fight Time!!! Amazing work as always Revi! ^^
-- Schiller lyrics Oh and the contest is open! [link] looks amazing espeshily the background
-- When life throws lemons at you.... Throw them back and say I WANT PEPSI !! [link] |
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May 12
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Critiques
The light source isn't clear - it looks like it's from the top right, and then you look at her right hand and the headphones and you aren't so sure. If you are going to have the light source be from the top right, it doesn't make much sense to have the light wrapping around the left knee like that - the knee should block the light from the underside of the knee.
The clothing folds are pretty random-looking, especially on the shirt.
This might just be a personal taste thing, but the gradient lighting flattens the image out even more. She appears to have her pinky sticking off of the side of her right hand, versus the top of the hand.
Beeeest of luck!
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