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I got some new brushes from brusheezyz and I wanted to have a reason to try them out, so I drew a picture of Revi LoL
The pose was a pain. If you still see some mistakes, you can tell me what I could change/improve , because I'm blind, sometimes XP
I dunno, I'm sick of doing mistakes again and again x.x
Hm, maybe I'll use is as a new DA I.D. , I'm not sure yet.
Hope you like it ^-^

Revi ( c ) me
glow brushes are from brusheezyz
edit.: I've found out that the brushes artist is on DA, too X3
Take a look at ~rubina119 's art ^-^

Don't steak my character :bucktooth:

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:iconboomie0123:
The first look at this piece had me impressed, but then again all of this artist's pieces leave me impressed. Overall the impact got the most points, because of how well everything came together. Then again, there were those points that could use some improvement. One of them being how the proportion of body to the legs is a bit off, and then there's how far the head goes back. Those were just little things that bothered me, but now on to the more important things. Though I think the pose and background are good; the pose seems a bit generic. Some more originality to the pose, and maybe incorporating that into the background, after those little details, there really isn't much else I can say about this, other than to keep impressing me.
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Good color choices.

The light source isn't clear - it looks like it's from the top right, and then you look at her right hand and the headphones and you aren't so sure. If you are going to have the light source be from the top right, it doesn't make much sense to have the light wrapping around the left knee like that - the knee should block the light from the underside of the knee.

The clothing folds are pretty random-looking, especially on the shirt.

This might just be a personal taste thing, but the gradient lighting flattens the image out even more. She appears to have her pinky sticking off of the side of her right hand, versus the top of the hand.

Beeeest of luck!
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sooo cool! I love your drawing style!

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Oh wow, awesome. :3

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Amazing work as always Revi! ^^

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Awesome Revi. Me and my friend are doing pixel arts. May we make Revi?

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It's awesome X3 keep up ur good work X3
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awesomeness :boogie:

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Very awesome :D

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looks amazing espeshily the background =D ^^

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:D :D love the bg ^^

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Awesome :D I like your coloring

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